On Friday it was Elm Parks school Jubilee birthday. I saw children wearing colourful party hats and I saw lots of parents. I also saw a yummy birthday cake and the cake has decorations. The decorations were blue snowflakes. Its so pretty, I love it.
"I like writing because I am good at it. I am proud of the words I used to describe the cake. Next time I could use more describing words to describe other things."
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Wow! I love all the describing words you have used in your writing. The cake looked very yum, I wish we could have a piece.
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